literature

Just Listen, Okay?

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Now, I know
Your whole world is crashing down
But just listen for a second
Just listen to me now
I'm telling you I've been there but
A broken heart isn't the end
Just pay attention honey
You can make it through
He's not your world and
frankly, he doesn't deserve to be
Now, I know
You want to scream the rooftops off
And cry yourself a mote
To keep them all away
And I know you have that right
But please just pay attention
I know, I know
I've been there before when it falls apart
And it happens to the best of us but
You can put it back together
Better than anyone else honey and
Just listen to me because I know
That you're world is crashing down
And you can't find the way out
Now I know
You don't think you'll survive this
But just pay attention now
You're already surviving
Eh. Written in about 5 minutes.
This was written for a friend, though she hasn't seen it.

Any criticism is appreciated.
© 2006 - 2024 pixijane
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XdrownmeslowlyX's avatar
This almost made me cry. I favorited this a long time ago, and I decided to come back and leave a comment. Good job. Just wondering, and I know its none of my bisuness or anything, but did you ever show it to your friend?